For the sake of arguement, and to give us some kind of initial structure to work around I have stolen one of the character's from the apple ads. What do you think to this...





I want to give it more narrative though so i'm going to do more, your story is great Cath could be really successful, I think a tag line at the end to do with the printer and paper will give it more focus tho, especially when a viewer is going to be EXPECTING a comment about turning off the lights

KERRIE